I Met My Sweetheart By the Moonlight

I met my sweetheart
by the moonlight
which made me love
him more when I reached 
to kiss his cute lips but
missed instead smooching 
his moustache as his eyes
opened wide as if a 
watered flower in a pot,
causing my dreams to wake
up laughing so loudly
that people on the street
heard my hearty laughter,
resulting in a rolling tsunami
upon the near shore


April 30, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 9:40 PM
Back with congrats, Sonia.
Walker Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 10:46 PM
Line, thank you for your support. ~ Sonia
Y. Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 11:16 PM
Hi Sonia, This was cute. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
Walker Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 11:35 PM
Alexis, I appreciate your congratulations. Thank you for commenting. Hugs, Sonia.
Gentry Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 10:26 PM
Congratulations on your placement. Unique and beautiful!
Walker Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 10:47 PM
Susan, thank you for your thoughtful comment. Hope it put a smile on your face. ~ Sonia
Gauthier Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 5:54 PM
A lovely delightful read, Sonia.
Walker Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 7:52 PM
Line, thank you for your positive comment. ~ Sonia
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