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I Make Love

I swim Making love to the sea I move Making love to the dance I speak Making love to the voice. I write Making love to the poem This passion for life Keeps my spirit alive Rhythm I breathe Love is my dice Flaming whatever Feels as cold as ice I make love and love makes me The simplest guide to harmony When the moment feels like eternity.

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Susan Gentry

Date: 6/22/2018 6:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this well-written poem, simple but elegant.

Natasha Turner
Date: 6/24/2018 12:34:00 AM

Thanks. Hugs xxx

L. J. Carber

Date: 6/18/2018 6:35:00 PM

Natasha, I love this!!! So simple, yet so elegant-- not an easy thing to pull off! And the last stanza has 3 perfect lines, and remarkably profound thought, with echoes of the Beatles ('the love you make equals the love you take') and Jesus-- love one another--all wrapped up in the eternal moment.

Natasha Turner
Date: 6/18/2018 10:41:00 PM

Very happy that you liked it :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/18/2018 12:48:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great win poem, Natasha :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/18/2018 9:41:00 AM

A wonderful poem of with passion for being in the moment. Congratulations for your win :)

Natasha Turner
Date: 6/18/2018 10:52:00 AM

Thanks dear :)

Jay Vee

Date: 2/19/2018 9:39:00 AM

Really great work! Really paints a beautiful picture. That's getting printed an going on the wall!

Natasha Turner
Date: 6/18/2018 10:52:00 AM

Thanks Jay :)

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 2/10/2018 10:43:00 AM

A very beautiful written poem, it s true that life is really short and we must enjoy every single moment of it, no matter what we are doing, if we do it with fun, everything will be easy and we ll have fun also, don t care what the world think and say just do what make us pleased, a very nice poem, welcome to poetrysoup. I m sure that you ll love your long stay here, good luck, continue to write and yeah do you know that even my smaller sister(who s 13) name is also Natasha, so good luck

Natasha Turner
Date: 2/10/2018 10:46:00 AM

Thanks and tell your sister that she has a beautiful name lol :)

Silent One

Date: 2/10/2018 4:53:00 AM

Uplifiting and well written first post Natasha.. Welcome to poetry soup..

Natasha Turner
Date: 2/10/2018 5:01:00 AM

Thanks