Kim Merryman Poet Verse

I Made a Wish - a Waltz Wave

A
shooting
star
fell from
the sky. I
closed my
eyes
and made
a wish. I
wished for true love
to find me,
embrace
me,
own me.
Wonder of
wonders
my
wish came
true.

2/18/2013

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Constance La France June 10, 2015 at 7:23 AM Kim, oh your waltzing wave is so pretty and dreamy, lovely wave, a beautiful example for your contest, 7

Andrea Dietrich March 24, 2013 at 2:46 PM this is fantastic , Kim!! a lovely little poem. I see you have not posted so many lately. Hope to see a lot more from you.

Debra Squyres February 19, 2013 at 4:57 PM I like that your waltz wave had a happy ending.... so far my wish is yet to be granted...ever hopeful. I like this form..thanks for the introduction to it !!

Demetrios Trifiatis February 19, 2013 at 2:09 PM Your wish came true, I am so happy for you! Excellent! High marks!

Sara Kendrick February 19, 2013 at 12:19 PM Enjoyed reading your work today..Very creative way to go with the topic..Thanks for stopping by..Your review was very uplifting.Sara

Audrey Haick February 18, 2013 at 8:47 PM Some times dreams do come true, Kim! Enjoy your week! Love, Annalise

John Loving Iii February 18, 2013 at 5:30 PM Lucky you

Joseph May February 18, 2013 at 5:09 PM delightful write Kim....best wishes