I M Overloaded

When you were mine
I deposited myself on you
felt light
now, you are others'
you put your weight on me
and, I am overloaded
can't move on......
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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February 28, 2016 at 8:13 AM
Birat, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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January 5, 2015 at 1:00 AM
Thanks you so much Mary Jo Hoose for your energetic words.
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