I luv u

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you … are the savor of my sweet … the abyss of my gaze, the anvil of my darkness, and life’s warm sigh upon my nape, whispered low, of all things … wondrous.

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Ink Empress

Date: 11/30/2024 5:50:00 AM

This is so beautiful along with all the other poems youv posted here today. Your way with words is always so very heart touching and soulful! Pleasure reading this dear greg. Sending you light always

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/30/2024 8:54:00 AM

Thank you so very kindly, my friend - I so appreciate it, as I get very few comments anymore. I messed up the title on this one so I’m glad you commented because I wouldn’t have noticed lol. Blessings to you. I hope you have a wonderful holiday season!