Notes About The Poem

I luv u

you … are the savor of my sweet

the abyss of my gaze

the anvil of my darkness

and life’s warm sigh … upon my nape

whispered low of all things …

wondrous.




October 20, 2025
For the “Bite Size Contest Number 126” Poetry Contest
Line Gauthier, Judge & Sponsor
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Dietrich Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 11:41 AM
Congrats, Gregory. Amazing short verse
Kauffman Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 12:01 PM
Wondrous, Greg! A beautiful list of all things lovely in love! And truly the heart of love survives the incoming waves! Blessings! Congrats and high fives!
Empress Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 5:50 AM
This is so beautiful along with all the other poems youv posted here today. Your way with words is always so very heart touching and soulful! Pleasure reading this dear greg. Sending you light always
Barden Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 8:54 AM
Thank you so very kindly, my friend - I so appreciate it, as I get very few comments anymore. I messed up the title on this one so I’m glad you commented because I wouldn’t have noticed lol. Blessings to you. I hope you have a wonderful holiday season!
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