Christie Morris Poet Free verse

I Loved You, Raven

Raven, thy beauty is to me,
   More than everything.
Your hair, touched by death,
   Yet still so fair.
I loved you then,
   And love you still.

I gave you all,
   My heart to boot,
Yet you took it all,
   And followed suit.
Then giving up,
   And falling dead.
Who is to blame,
   For live's now shame.

Why did you go?
   Why did you die?
I loved you
   Didn't I!

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David William Breidenthal July 2, 2011 at 8:44 PM The ?s bring the poem to life!!Greeeat! -:)David(:

Judy Konos February 7, 2011 at 4:23 PM Why did you go? Why did you die? I loved you Didn't I! VERY POWERFUL....THANK YOU

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 2, 2011 at 4:30 AM Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with it's creative theme.. good luck in the contest if u have entered Among the Dead... hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv..