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I loved the way you loved me

I Loved the way you loved me...... It was a mid night and I woke you from your sleep I held you tight in my arms while you murmur. I soaked my love with your lips and opened your heart for my love to get into your soul. I felt in my mind whether or not I should be allowed but your heat made me to understand that you are ready You cared me with your love which I never felt before You were like a princess stood with your passionate love I was set free to have your love however I wanted When I heard your beautiful words, my heart kept beat hard I let go all my love on you that I had stored for you My secret of love had written in your heart with my pen I loved you the way you loved me with much understanding No matter what wonders my love have seen you But these memories will never leave me. Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved @ 2016 Ravi Sathasivam

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Date: 11/15/2016 6:23:00 PM
You have expressed well a deep and passionate love from a compassionate heart Ravi! Beautiful! 7 ; )
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 11/17/2016 4:26:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated. Ravi
Date: 11/11/2016 2:05:00 PM
Ahhh!! Romantic..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 11/17/2016 4:26:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated. Ravi
Date: 11/10/2016 9:03:00 PM
Beautifully penned Ravi
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Date: 11/17/2016 4:26:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated. Ravi
Date: 11/10/2016 8:07:00 PM
It sounds like a deep and wonderful love, Ravi. you made it come to life.
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Date: 11/17/2016 4:27:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend Andrea. Appreciated. Love , Ravi xxx
Date: 11/10/2016 2:12:00 PM
This is both romantic and passionate, Ravi. You write from deep within. Well done. Regards // paul
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Date: 11/17/2016 4:28:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated. Ravi
Date: 11/10/2016 7:49:00 AM
Lovely flowers of Passion ...
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 11/17/2016 4:28:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated. Ravi
Date: 11/10/2016 5:51:00 AM
Romanticism wrapped into eroticism so beautifully my friend, Ravi!
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Date: 11/17/2016 4:28:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated. Ravi
Date: 11/10/2016 3:05:00 AM
- This is beautiful and a pleasure to read, Ravi - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/17/2016 4:29:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend Anne. Appreciated. Hugs and love Ravi xxxx