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I Love You Very Much

"I love you very much" he claimed
whilst looking in my eyes,
"I love YOU very much" I said
for love i did surmise.

" I love YOU very much" 
responded to reply.
" I love you very much" 
yo-yoing love-outcry.

'I love you very much' went on,
lasting two whole years.
This loving very much we said
through work and loving tears.

I love you very much, we shared
sounding like two babies,
'I love you very much' we paired
even through the maybes.

Now, thinking of him whom I loved
Time gone of no love-such,
five words forsake with love-heartache...

I loved you very much.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/28/2018 9:19:00 AM
Paris very emotional write touches humanity, Yes even hard-headed men! This one too shall be a FAV for me.(Kind of a romantic :) in a Godly good way... Love the flow...Should be complied with your verse... "Yes I Can Cry" Write on! James~~
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Paris-Maree Boreham
Date: 7/28/2018 11:57:00 AM
that's a nice comment thanks James Edward Lee Sr,
Date: 7/26/2018 8:18:00 PM
I really got the sense of lonely isolation...that silent soft scream that injects the ghost of what was lost everywhere and in everything...even in your own face gazing in the mirror...that phantom limb of loss Thank you for your words!!!
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Paris-Maree Boreham
Date: 7/27/2018 6:13:00 AM
Thank You for your comment Ryan Hughes :)
Date: 7/16/2018 8:47:00 AM
SPEECHLESS!
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Paris-Maree Boreham
Date: 7/17/2018 5:20:00 AM
Perhaps, that's a good thing?! hmm lol
Date: 7/15/2018 3:28:00 PM
- So lovely and sweet, P.M. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/17/2018 5:20:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise :)