I Love You Too

At first Her toy Was my heart But now When she say I love you I smile and say I love you too Without a clue It's just the way A farmished cat Would a rat!

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/19/2013 4:03:00 PM

wow, At first her toy.. Alozor, love that... I have the same problem with my fiance.. we he says "I love you" I smile , and say... "you better" lol... out of fun of course... it take the feeling of being programed away... But, he know I love him, and when I tell him... He better tell me... hahahahah ~xox~ Linda

Alozor Michael Ikechukwu
Date: 8/19/2013 4:27:00 PM

Hahaha...those initial "unseriousness"...fun to ruminate on...best regard. Love, always...Michael

Linda Jackson

Date: 8/19/2013 2:21:00 PM

Hi an interesting poem. It is rather cynical about love. A good poem. Best wishes Linda x

Alozor Michael Ikechukwu
Date: 8/19/2013 4:26:00 PM

Thanks a bunch mate. Love, always.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/19/2013 10:27:00 AM

- Ohhhh, soooo sweet !!! - I love it !!! - It's always enjoyable with your visit and your comments, thank you Alozor Michael !!!!- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Alozor Michael Ikechukwu
Date: 8/19/2013 10:52:00 AM

I am humbled. Thanks dearest Anne.