I Love You No More

I have so much anticipation 
Love always in supplication
Over a cup of tea to think it over and over again
Vend this yearning that abuse my mind
Exhausted with your banter acts
You confused me with your synthetic laughs
Owed me with so much love
Unaware of your context move
Now I’m awake with this contusion
Out of the blue, it’s come a new you
Mine you if I tell you I’m not in love with you
Oh! Could I say it loud?
Right, I heard you say why?
End is now my dear lover.

(Acrostic form)
Lie
17/9/08
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Sietesantos Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 8:01 AM
Hi Lena, great write - we have to know when someone is not the one and when to move on! Thank you for sharing this gem!
Emp Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 2:39 PM
Thank you so much, yes we need to accept the fact that one is not moving right you need to let go, so you will grow
Christian Avatar
May 30, 2014 at 3:23 PM
well expressed the end of a love thanks for your kind words on my poems
Emp Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 12:55 AM
Thanks Diane thanks for this warmth comment too.
Bordner Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 1:19 AM
The last line is so sadly definitive. "Now I awake with this contusion..." very meaningful, and original. Abuse of the mind as you say, fascinating Lena. Tough poetry. J.A.B.
Emp Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 2:21 AM
Thanks I love to write a poem base on what I feel at the moment and express it thoroughly through words. Thanks for this wonderful comment Justin.
Dietrich Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 10:57 PM
good one done in acrostic form!! I enjoyed the read.
Emp Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 6:38 AM
Thanks Andrea for your kind comment.
Jones Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 6:08 PM
Another wonderful poem...confused me with your synthetic laughs..many people do this....I'm finding out....so sad people do this to each other...
Emp Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 6:36 AM
we cannot avoid it Donna... there are few people who are not so real. Thanks for this warmth comment.
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