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I Love You, My Divine Lover

Beholding my eyes, You can see my heart exposing depth and breadth of love’s essence I gained from Your compassionate presence forever to stay; never will depart. Looking into Your eyes with pure delight my illumined faith expresses love’s bliss You keep on granting that I cannot miss with Your gift of eternal life and light. My Saviour God Who loves me as I am You deserve my love, since You first loved* me esteeming You always is my earnest plea--- while caring for others, Your sheep and lamb. Your love for me, Lord, is sublimely great enabling my devotion that's earnest commitment of gracious and fervent zest surpassing thrill of romantic joy's weight.**
*1John 4:19 We love him (GOD), because he first loved us. October 23, 2021 **Last stanza added on January 3, 2022 1st place, "Forever My Love Valentine" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by BJ Legros Kelley; judged on 2/8/2022.
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Perna Avatar
August 11, 2023 at 1:53 PM
All of your poems are so Lovely, well written with important messages! I loved reading so much of your work! Amazing, that's all I can say. I appreciate the messages about God! Thank you.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 10, 2022 at 12:14 PM
Congratulations on your win. A "Beautiful" write. I Love This One. Have a great/blessed day...............
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 9, 2022 at 2:33 PM
A lovely faith filled poem Beata. Congratulations on your win. Blessings xxoo
Legros Kelley Avatar
February 8, 2022 at 10:48 PM
Congratulations on your placement of your amazing poem in First Place Beata! What a lovely and beautiful poem. Thank you for entering this precious work of love in this contest. Your poem truly speaks of True Love forever! God bless you my friend ~ <3 ~ B.J.
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October 23, 2021 at 1:04 AM
Beata, Calmness in a poem to end all strife. No greater love in this world or the next. Thankyou for the prayers, btw. -Richard
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