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I Love You My Deer

The times you choose to show yourself to me are so ill-timed for my lifestyle. The times you are lost in the trees and brush of the woods I smile, and know that you are there. Sometimes, when driving our little gravel road, I am surprised you haven’t tumbled down the steep hill and plop ------- on the road ahead Legs tangled in your antlers. The sighting of a herd of you, a herd being six or seven, lights the twilight with gratitude as my heart holds a lighter beat. My life is full of your presence in my woods. There is no where I would rather live than here. The times you are lost in the trees and brush of the woods I smile, and know that you are there.

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Date: 2/22/2020 11:33:00 AM
An intelligent, well constructed work, Alison. Emotive and charming. Thanks for your review of Rest In Peace. Howard
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Alison Hodges
Date: 2/22/2020 12:02:00 PM
Thank you for your considered words. Much appreciated. This is one of my favorites.

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