I Love You Mom

I smile as I remember the holidays past
The table full
The smells are wonderful
You are in total control
Like a little general you command your kitchen
And all who dare to enter
I love you mom

I smile now for another Thanksgiving
The table full
The smells are wonderful
But the general fights to hold on to some control
I love you mom

The eyes question
You make yourself busy
You need to feel needed
I love you mom

You question many times what you are supposed to cook
And I smile when I get there and you cooked the same as I
You tire quickly but tough as they come you work diligently 
Until all is done
I love you mom

We’re a little too fast
A little too loud
Your conversations have fallen quiet
But having all of us around you
I can read in your face is what puts you at ease
It gives much peace
I love you mom

Did you have a good Thanksgiving 
Others will ask
It was spent with my mom
So I was blessed
I love you mom

God make me the daughter
That my mom now needs
The daughter becomes the parent 
And now takes the lead
I love you mom

You ask the same question 
Over and over and frustrated 
You figure it out and get upset
I touch your cheek
And say the same thing I always say
That always sounds brand new to you
Mom you can forget everything else
But just remember
I’m your favorite
The smile in your eyes,
The smile on your face
The laughter it brings
It works every time
I love you mom

dedicated to Nell Young Wise
with many, many tears
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008


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Date: 1/19/2014 6:25:00 PM
I remembered this poignant poem, that left it's impression in my heart..... I remember too, your telling me of her struggles, the memory loss, and how difficult it must have been for you to patiently stand by and watch with a heavy heart. But somehow, those "I Love you words" carry long past her time, and our own. Still love this one very much.
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Date: 3/11/2009 9:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/11/2009 9:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Nothing more beautiful than a mother. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 3/11/2009 9:18:00 AM
Congratulations Laurie on "I Love You Mom" being featured. Enjoyed this poem before. Still a touching read. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 3/9/2009 4:37:00 PM
Beautiful tribute to family. My mother was usually drunk on Thanksgiving and every other day so I do not have this kind of experience with "Mom" but I can appreciate your wonderful writing here, Laurie and it is a well-deserved choice to be a feature this week at the Soup. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/9/2009 1:59:00 PM
Congratulations on this beautfully written piece being featured this week! Love, Robin
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Date: 3/9/2009 11:49:00 AM
Laurie - Congratulations on your poem being featured this week! Very well deserved. Peace always, John
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Date: 3/9/2009 10:00:00 AM
Congrats on this being featured---thumbs up
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Date: 3/9/2009 6:31:00 AM
Never read this before Laurie. A deeply moving and beautiful tribute. Tears, chills, as I am completely overwhelmed here by this write. Of course, remembering the mom I lost. Congratulations on your beautiful featured write and God Bless. Love & hugs, Shar
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Date: 3/9/2009 1:01:00 AM
Congrats on your feature this week Laurie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/8/2009 8:19:00 PM
Just stopped in to congratulate you for being featured this week, and to thank you for all your wonderful comments, you are a peach. Blessings, Ron
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Date: 3/8/2009 7:48:00 PM
Laurie - Very heart wrenching write Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 3/8/2009 6:18:00 PM
Such a sad situation. Nice dedication to your mother. The emotion comes through your words in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing! Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 3/8/2009 5:56:00 PM
Caught this again in the featured poem section, and even though I read it before, it made my eyes tear all over again.Beautiful beautiful poem, Miss Laurie Gin..made me miss my mom, wearing her apron running around preparing Thanksgiving for all of us.I lost mine many years ago, much too young,...but same feelings in my heart as you. Wrote 'Butter Toffee',about my mother...WE DO share a lot in common.aren't we lucky to have had mothers like described in your poem?!! Congrats on being featured!:)
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Date: 2/28/2009 10:21:00 AM
Laurie I lost mine a couple of years past and holidays are always the hardest. This poem really hits close to home with this beautiful heartfelt write. Laurie you have a God given gift for writing, and your comments blow me away, Blessings to you my friend, Ron
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Date: 2/27/2009 4:34:00 AM
moms are preecious, and must be cherished a real good piece abe
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Date: 2/13/2009 7:37:00 AM
Wow-- so much beauty written in words-- many many hugs and kisses 4 you
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Date: 2/1/2009 10:33:00 AM
Laurie, this is a beautifully written poem straiight from your heart to your mother. Both my parents are in their 80,s and it is not easy becoming the parent and wayching them fade. lovely, Lauriedu! Awesome write! Love and hugs, Robin
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Date: 1/14/2009 9:23:00 AM
Touching write. It takes much patience and understanding, sometimes overwhelming. Love shines through in this. Vince
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Date: 11/30/2008 1:39:00 PM
HI!! ^.^ Love Alexz
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Date: 11/28/2008 7:13:00 PM
Oh my, Laurie, this made my eyes water, so that it was hard to finish reading it. So beautifully written,... yet, so hard to see the change that occurs, when once they cared for us, you said it all so brilliantly in this poem. Love, Carrie
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Date: 11/28/2008 5:21:00 AM
Laurie this is very beautiful touched my heart Wonderful trbute Michael
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