Dorian Petersen Potter Poet Rhyme

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I Love You Forever and Ever

(Rhyme) 


Eh baby you know me so well 
What more is there to tell 
I just want all your Love 
that shines like stars above. 

Let me give you now a hot kiss 
There's so much that we miss 
I can be forever all that you want 
And this is not from me just a rant. 

Lets go somewhere and have some fun 
I'll always be forever your hot sun 
Just come and I will open wide hearts door 
Oh baby just come and take me some more. 

Just let me be your brightest star 
The one that's very close not far 
You know where I am right now 
Meanwhile my love rhyme for you flows. 

You just come to me my darling my honey 
You're got the most radiant smile so sunny 
Now lets get together and heat the night 
Just make my heart that loves you burst bright. 

Your love for me day in and night out just shine 
And so it is also forever and forever here mine. 


Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2014 


November,23,2014

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Cherl Dunn November 23, 2014 at 10:00 PM Baby girl this is one rightious right of love and passion, this is one lucky young man to have your heart shine upon him in this romantic way, you've truely given him a gift of the inner heart my young lady poet cheri Dorian Petersen Potter November 23, 2014 at 10:49 PM Thank you so much Cheryl my dear friend. You're so sweet and kind to me with all your fabulous comments. Much appreciated my very dear friend.Have a wonderful week! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.

Jack Ellison November 23, 2014 at 10:38 AM "Let me give you now a hot kiss!" Sure got my attention, sweet thing! "Oh baby just come and take me some more" And again but this time I drooled as well! LOL Love and hugs, Jack XXXX

Bl Devnath November 23, 2014 at 9:28 AM Wonderful poem on love filled with heartfelt passion and romance in boom. 7 i feel here. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl Dorian Petersen Potter November 23, 2014 at 9:57 AM My dear friend BL thank you so much for your very awesome comment! So much appreciated so! I always have this wish for my poems to move and inspire the others about Love and God or whatever write about. Have a great week! :) Love and hugs! Xxxx D

Paul Callus November 23, 2014 at 8:03 AM Forever and ever!! now that sure is a special kind of love!! Very passionate and sincere. a 7 rating it deserves! Have a nice Sunday, Dorian. // paul Dorian Petersen Potter November 23, 2014 at 8:24 AM My dear friend Paul thank you so much for all your kindness. I much appreciate you in all.have a great day week ahead! God bless! :) Love and hugs! xxxxx D.

John Fleming November 23, 2014 at 4:25 AM Most charming! :) Dorian Petersen Potter November 23, 2014 at 7:18 AM Thank you so much John for stopping by and kind commtnts! ;) D.Xxxx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 23, 2014 at 3:06 AM Lovely n passionate Dorian! Awesome words n beautiful rhyming, love the brightest yet closest star,, a perfect 7 my dear friend! Dorian Petersen Potter November 23, 2014 at 7:21 AM Thank you so much Dr. Upma my dear friend for your very awesome comment and all! Much appreciated. :) xxxx D.