I Love You

They didn’t like it...
My honest gift.
I guess they didn’t like me,
to accept the truth. 

The expensive truth with all the open wounds,
The expensive truth with all its cruelty, 
The expensive truth with no sympathy,
The expensive truth that had no empathy... 

I couldn’t help it
I saw it in their eyes
They were begging for such a gift
I heard their screaming soul cry for it

I couldn’t help but take notice of it all
Every plead caught my attention 
And so here I am 
Here I stand 
With a gift for you 

I’m sorry for the lies 
Sorry for the other gifts that weren’t real
That weren’t yours 

But here I stand with a gift for you 
You might not like me 
But please like it

This time 
It’s yours and only yours
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Raynes Avatar
January 10, 2020 at 1:12 PM
A beautiful write, a fav
Flower Avatar
January 11, 2020 at 2:54 PM
Thank you ??
Meany Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 3:07 PM
Beautiful poem
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January 7, 2019 at 4:53 PM
Thank you
Sharma Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 7:57 PM
Very beautiful I like this piece my favorite,
Flower Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 2:31 AM
Thank you
Pan Avatar
October 21, 2018 at 1:40 AM
I like this poem, also the poet
Flower Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 2:31 AM
Thank you
Robinson Jr. Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 10:43 AM
Powerful and incisive insight, IF! Truth is a gift that always keeps giving. But, a lot of people shun from accepting it. Such is life, living at the modern. Great poetry. May love light your path in life always. Romantic Warrior
Flower Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 3:04 PM
yes, a lot of people are too sensitive nowadays from the truth.. yes such is life sadly. thank you :)
Bangalee Avatar
September 23, 2018 at 11:57 PM
nicely penned- the love within confession, acknowledgement, asking forgiveness
Flower Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 3:02 PM
yes! thank you :)
Imtiaz Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 8:52 AM
Pure natural words with natural feelings. Like it no doubt
Flower Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 9:17 AM
THANK YOU :)
Ajmal Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 7:02 AM
Ah it s so deep and heartfelt write, I really enjoyed reading it
Flower Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 7:23 AM
i am glad that you did :) thank you :)
One Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 4:57 AM
Deep and emotive..
Flower Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 7:23 AM
Thank you :)
Andresen Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 3:18 PM
- Honesty lasts long ... start with new sheets :) - Lovely and touching written, Anna - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Flower Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 3:22 PM
Thank you :)
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