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I Love You

They didn’t like it...
My honest gift.
I guess they didn’t like me,
to accept the truth. 

The expensive truth with all the open wounds,
The expensive truth with all its cruelty, 
The expensive truth with no sympathy,
The expensive truth that had no empathy... 

I couldn’t help it
I saw it in their eyes
They were begging for such a gift
I heard their screaming soul cry for it

I couldn’t help but take notice of it all
Every plead caught my attention 
And so here I am 
Here I stand 
With a gift for you 

I’m sorry for the lies 
Sorry for the other gifts that weren’t real
That weren’t yours 

But here I stand with a gift for you 
You might not like me 
But please like it

This time 
It’s yours and only yours

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/10/2020 1:12:00 PM
A beautiful write, a fav
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Unfamiliar Flower
Date: 1/11/2020 2:54:00 PM
Thank you ??
Date: 11/9/2018 3:07:00 PM
Beautiful poem
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Unfamiliar Flower
Date: 1/7/2019 4:53:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 10/22/2018 7:57:00 PM
Very beautiful I like this piece my favorite,
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Unfamiliar Flower
Date: 11/8/2018 2:31:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 10/21/2018 1:40:00 AM
I like this poem, also the poet
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Unfamiliar Flower
Date: 11/8/2018 2:31:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 10/13/2018 10:43:00 AM
Powerful and incisive insight, IF! Truth is a gift that always keeps giving. But, a lot of people shun from accepting it. Such is life, living at the modern. Great poetry. May love light your path in life always. Romantic Warrior
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Unfamiliar Flower
Date: 10/14/2018 3:04:00 PM
yes, a lot of people are too sensitive nowadays from the truth.. yes such is life sadly. thank you :)
Date: 9/23/2018 11:57:00 PM
nicely penned- the love within confession, acknowledgement, asking forgiveness
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Unfamiliar Flower
Date: 10/14/2018 3:02:00 PM
yes! thank you :)
Date: 9/3/2018 8:52:00 AM
Pure natural words with natural feelings. Like it no doubt
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Unfamiliar Flower
Date: 9/3/2018 9:17:00 AM
THANK YOU :)
Date: 2/28/2018 7:02:00 AM
Ah it s so deep and heartfelt write, I really enjoyed reading it
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Unfamiliar Flower
Date: 2/28/2018 7:23:00 AM
i am glad that you did :) thank you :)
Date: 2/27/2018 4:57:00 AM
Deep and emotive..
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Unfamiliar Flower
Date: 2/28/2018 7:23:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 2/26/2018 3:18:00 PM
- Honesty lasts long ... start with new sheets :) - Lovely and touching written, Anna - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Unfamiliar Flower
Date: 2/26/2018 3:22:00 PM
Thank you :)

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