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I Love You

I love your grumpiness I love your mood swings I love your stubbornness I love your voice when you sing I love the way your silence is killing me I love the way your rants are giving me chills I love how you scolded me when you're mad I love how your face looks like when you're pissed I love it when you're keeping up with my childishness I love it when you're clenching your fist out of anger I love it when you told me about your likes I love it when you told me about your dislikes I love it when you told me about your story I love how you kissed me I love how you hugged me I love how you carried me I love how you caressed me I love it when you ignore me I love how it hurts I love it that I miss you I love it that I love you I love you.

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Moon Flower

Date: 4/8/2016 10:26:00 AM

What a start up piece. So full of emotion. Congrats for making yourself here. ;) Hugs.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/2/2016 2:11:00 AM

Jeanne, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Jeanne Mae Paig
Date: 4/2/2016 2:18:00 AM

Hi Linda. Thank you for your time. Since I am new member here, I would need time to discover and wander around everthing. I appreciate your invitation and will be accepting soon if I my will wishes to. :)