I Love You

I love you...

What is love if it does not have two shared parts.
I can love you with all my heart but that doesnt make us true to heart.
True love is when both people love eachother and can't stand to be apart.

I love you...

But waiting for you to love me too is reaking my heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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A   Avatar
October 23, 2010 at 12:39 PM
Lovely poem, for a 16 year old you write very clever. enjoyed ,..p.d.
Torres Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 3:29 PM
this is really nice now i remember you lol sorry about my psychotic ex girl friend she doesnt know how to control her anger but i really like this poem and i think we have all been thru a couple of these problems lol
Whitehead Avatar
July 28, 2010 at 3:50 PM
I feel for you, this poem speaks volumes to me. Think hard before waiting for someone to love you back, you may wait a lifetime and miss out on real happiness. You know already that it is a one way affair, your poem speaks to you from your still small voice and you should heed what it is telling you,much love
Kendrick Avatar
July 23, 2010 at 3:27 PM
One-sided love doesn't work for sure..Neat topic that you have chosen..Sara
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