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I Love You

A Love Poem using words four letters or less. down from a star, high up on the hill I fell in love, when I saw you, a veil of deep gaze in your blue eyes, I read the poem of hope in your aura, each hour I wake up to see a new moon no word to say or hear, only face to face we look at the lux sky, an open cage and as a soft tune plays in lute, we sail in our vast blue maze of life... Did you call my name? I can't hear. A rip in my ribs, to love is to be on fire will we hold on as long as we live? just like you and me, A dew drop fell on the rose, they do not own, they just let go. we pay our debt, time to time, in mist of same pain we say "I Love you

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Date: 10/2/2023 7:45:00 AM
You truly are so gifted, you did this effortlessly! I just posted mine too and was a very challenging task writing with just 4 letter words. But seeing yours made me feel its not that difficult! Brilliant i especially love the veil line and the last line! Impeccable! Fave for me
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 10/2/2023 7:48:00 AM
My honor to get your applaud. You gave me a good boost of motivation dear friend. Your poems i read a few....just excellent
Date: 10/2/2023 6:55:00 AM
What a beautiful take on the theme. Gotta love the lute reference Deb
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 10/3/2023 9:05:00 PM
Thanks dear Tom, your visit and uplifting wishes

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