I Love You

A Love Poem using words four letters or less.

down from a star, high up on the hill
I fell in love, when I saw you, 
a veil of deep gaze in your blue eyes, 
I read the poem of hope in your aura, 
each hour I wake up to see a new moon 
no word to say or hear, only face to face 
we look at the lux sky, an open cage
and as a soft tune plays in lute, we sail
in our vast blue maze of life...
Did you call my name? I can't hear.
A rip in my ribs, to love is to be on fire
will we hold on as  long as we live?
just like you and me, 
A dew drop fell on the rose,
they do not own, they just let go.   
we pay our debt, time to time,
in mist of same pain we say "I Love you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Empress Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 7:45 AM
You truly are so gifted, you did this effortlessly! I just posted mine too and was a very challenging task writing with just 4 letter words. But seeing yours made me feel its not that difficult! Brilliant i especially love the veil line and the last line! Impeccable! Fave for me
Mitra Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 7:48 AM
My honor to get your applaud. You gave me a good boost of motivation dear friend. Your poems i read a few....just excellent
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