Anisha Dutta Poet Free verse

I Love You

I LOVE YOU

        Three  hesitant words with three syllable trembled 
        Seven heavens stepped on sublime soul feeling divine.
        Single dormant desire dazzled drowned, drenched.
        One momentary emotive urge whirled in vibrant vortex
         piercing placid plangent pearly pristine passion.

         The sweetest sentence of life  to listen or to speak came up:
          ' I love you'.

  
  04/01/22

        First Place
  Contest by Brian Strand

Re edited on 08/22/22

The meaning of Love
                                      Second place 

Contest by Anoucheka Gangabissoon

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Connie Marcum Wong August 27, 2022 at 8:46 PM “ One momentary emotive urge whirled in vibrant vortex” this line above the others depicts how one feels when falling in love. This is a wonderful expression of how it feels to be in love my friend. Congratulations on your Second Place win Anisha! Brilliant! Blessings xxoo Anisha Dutta September 1, 2022 at 10:59 AM Thanks Connie I honour your appreciation Love