I Love You

The crimson sun reminds your saffron blob 
My loving thoughts twirl like incessant waves.
In my heart, your splendid memories throb 
Your charming mien, for, my soul longs and craves.


Is my love an infatuation? No, it’s not out and out.
Our bonding has made me a complete man.
Why do I love you so much?  You know,
When I am distraught, your cajoling words solace me.
When I am indecisive, you are my strong morale.
How good you are! You tolerate my impatience, too.
The brilliant spark never withers and subjugates me. (of course, I enjoy it) 
In my accomplishments, your shadow reflects in backdrop.
Though years move on, seasons run and days fly,
My love for you constantly soars high.



I Love You Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Eve Roper 
Date: 24-10-2021.

Place: Honorable Mention
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Alex Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 12:04 AM
A wonder piece as your other works. Great feelings expressed. Congratulations!
Venkata Ramana Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 1:16 AM
Thank you so much for the best compliments and reading my other poems.
Roper Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 6:49 PM
Congratulations on your win, Patri. Thank you for entering it in the contest. Hugs Eve
Venkata Ramana Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 8:35 PM
Thank you so much for the compliments.
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