I Love You

Because you are delicious of chocolate taste I love you like a fat kid loves cake. Because you are my deepest desire I love the way your kisses start fire Even when we disagree I love the way you come to me Rolling along like the deep blue sea Sucking me in calm caressing my feet It is the way you say my name Soft or hard but always the same Kinetic energy bubbling my brain Loving you is pleasure loving you through pain. When time comes and I pass Before or after you our love will last. 10/21/2021 I LOVE YOU POETRY CONTEST SPONSOR EVE ROPER

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The Situation

Date: 9/26/2023 12:48:00 PM

More of what I expect of a country girl.

Karen Jones
Date: 9/26/2023 3:26:00 PM

Lol so I am predictable? Hmmm

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/21/2021 1:26:00 PM

Great arguments. Best for the contest.

Karen Jones
Date: 10/21/2021 1:44:00 PM

Thanks so much

David Kavanagh

Date: 10/21/2021 1:15:00 PM

Heya Karen, I love the way you get such a potent message across, using straightforward meaningful language, wishing you all the best for contest, cheers David

Karen Jones
Date: 10/21/2021 1:25:00 PM

David your words are kind and wishes appreciated.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/21/2021 11:45:00 AM

This poem is rally lovely Karen, I am almost sure it will feature very well in the contest. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Karen Jones
Date: 10/21/2021 11:48:00 AM

Wow that is so nice of you to say. I see it as a basic simple poem, that is happy to just be read. Thanks Jennifer.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 10/21/2021 11:35:00 AM

Well said! Enjoyed! (I hope your last 4 days were filled with love)! Aloha!

Karen Jones
Date: 10/21/2021 11:44:00 AM

Hugs Rico. Glad you enjoyed it. Wink.