Karen Jones Poet Rhyme

I Love You

Because you are delicious of chocolate taste
I love you like a fat kid loves cake.
Because you are my deepest desire
I love the way your kisses start fire
Even when we disagree
I love the way you come to me
Rolling along like the deep blue sea
Sucking me in calm caressing my feet
It is the way you say my name
Soft or hard but always the same
Kinetic energy bubbling my brain
Loving you is pleasure loving you through pain.
When time comes and I pass
Before or after you our love will last.




10/21/2021
I LOVE YOU POETRY CONTEST
SPONSOR EVE ROPER

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The Situation September 26, 2023 at 12:48 PM More of what I expect of a country girl. Karen Jones September 26, 2023 at 3:26 PM Lol so I am predictable? Hmmm

Victor Buhagiar October 21, 2021 at 1:26 PM Great arguments. Best for the contest. Karen Jones October 21, 2021 at 1:44 PM Thanks so much

David Kavanagh October 21, 2021 at 1:15 PM Heya Karen, I love the way you get such a potent message across, using straightforward meaningful language, wishing you all the best for contest, cheers David Karen Jones October 21, 2021 at 1:25 PM David your words are kind and wishes appreciated.

Jennifer Proxenos October 21, 2021 at 11:45 AM This poem is rally lovely Karen, I am almost sure it will feature very well in the contest. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Karen Jones October 21, 2021 at 11:48 AM Wow that is so nice of you to say. I see it as a basic simple poem, that is happy to just be read. Thanks Jennifer.

Rico Leffanta October 21, 2021 at 11:35 AM Well said! Enjoyed! (I hope your last 4 days were filled with love)! Aloha! Karen Jones October 21, 2021 at 11:44 AM Hugs Rico. Glad you enjoyed it. Wink.