I Love You

The eventide sun spread golden hue in my garden
as I saw your beauty blossom in my alluring arms. 
The sapphire patina of glistened iris bud unfurled 
in your dreamy eyes with the lilting luster of love.

A tiny drop of joyful tear in the corner of the eye
gleamed like the luring pearl of shimmering dew,
reflected radiant flicker of yearning in my heart, 
the view took me to the edge of the stalled time.

In the trance of the fusing embrace I saw a blue sea
form in your eyes where I floated on waves of desire.
I wished you knew I liked to see your eyes unclosed
till the end of time, so I could sail to the bay of bliss.

October 21, 2021
Contest : I Love You
Sponsor : Eve Roper
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Scragg Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 12:35 PM
Love the fluidity in the reading of your verses Subimal. A lovely poem. Congratulations on your win.
Roper Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 6:46 PM
Congratulations on your win, Subimal, this was a beautiful heartfelt poem from your heart. I especially love the last two lines. Thank you for entering it in the contest. Hugs Eve
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