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I Love You

Your lustrous eyes sparkle like the glint of the rising sun caught by the morning dew on leaves of grass. My world revolves around your mystifying gazelle eyes-- When you look at me, my love My day dawns… I blossom like countless flowers in spring; When you lower them My sun sets… I die a thousand deaths like leaves in fall. I love you in many ways like myriad shimmering stars in the firmament— Heavenly, ethereal, undying! ~10/10/21 ~Contest: I Love You ~Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Date: 10/25/2021 7:07:00 PM
A beautiful poem of romance Abdul and congratulations on your win in Eve’s contest. Well done… Belle
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Date: 10/25/2021 12:32:00 PM
Lovely expression of what you appreciate in your relationship. Beautifully written Abdul.
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Date: 10/25/2021 8:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest Abdul Malik.
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Date: 10/24/2021 6:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Abdul, this was a beautiful and heartfelt poem. Thank you for entering it in the contest. Hugs Eve
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