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I Love You

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My enchanted soul bows to your smile And feels the power of your love to rise This rising is such my heart you beguile As I feel serenity in your eyes To be loved like the dreamy light of dawn That moves away darkness and leaves no trace And gives a smile and a kiss to wish on In love's timeless realm my dreams won't replace Claim this world of joy, when our hearts are fed When love is held in our palms, both can hold To treasure our love's spool of golden thread That weaves the days and nights as we grow old How soft our years to make in memory How sweet and gentle the love you give me 10/18/21 contest I Love You sponsor Eve Roper

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Date: 10/25/2021 2:31:00 PM
Your “I Love You” poem is absolutely wonderful Frederic and so deserving of the win in Eve’s contest… Belle
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Frederic Parker
Date: 10/26/2021 11:49:00 AM
Thank you for your kindness Belle
Date: 10/25/2021 12:30:00 PM
Wonderfully expressed! Congrats on your win Frederic.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 10/26/2021 11:49:00 AM
Thank you very much Natasha
Date: 10/25/2021 8:17:00 AM
A great one... Congratulations on your placement in the contest
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Frederic Parker
Date: 10/26/2021 11:51:00 AM
Thank you Paghunda, you are very kind
Date: 10/25/2021 12:00:00 AM
A beautiful love song. Personal and poetic! Congratulations!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 10/26/2021 11:52:00 AM
Christuraj you are very kind, thank you
Date: 10/24/2021 7:52:00 PM
Dear Poet Dear Friend, I adore the glorious and tender flow from your loving heart to the tip of your golden pen. You enchant my soul with the appreciative adoring beauty of this piece. "To be loved like the dreamy light of dawn" - swoon worthy! "To treasure our love's spool of golden thread / That weaves the days and nights as we grow old" - breathtaking! Your inspire me with the lustrous depth of your artistry, Frederic. Congratulations for your excellent win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Frederic Parker
Date: 10/26/2021 11:58:00 AM
My Dear Friend, Dear Poet, you enchant my soul with your poetry and kind expression for my poem, the soul you have is truly gentle to me, to all...you are one of a kind, to have such a giving spirit in the world we live in is truly beautiful...Frederic
Date: 10/24/2021 6:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Frederic; you really touch my heart when I read this, it is just stunning. I am surprise you didn't get more comments and or reads. Thank you for entering it in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Frederic Parker
Date: 10/26/2021 12:01:00 PM
Thank you Eve and thank you for my placement in your contest...Surprise for the lack of comments...Dear Poet...I am use to it
Date: 10/18/2021 1:45:00 PM
A tear I shed for true love words.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 10/26/2021 12:02:00 PM
Thank you Robert for your kindness

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