Newton Ranaweera Poet Monoku

I Love You

i knelt and in class teacher’s voice whined i love you ~ she giggled behind


Syllable count: 17 syllables 

*A 1st Place* Win in the following contest (judged on Sept. 9, 2020) 

September 2, 2020 
My Most Unforgettable Moment In Highschool Poetry Contest
Sponsor: JCB Burl

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Eve Roper September 9, 2020 at 11:30 AM Good one, Newton. Congratulations on your first-place win. Newton Ranaweera September 9, 2020 at 12:07 PM Thank you so much, Line!!

Richard Lamoureux September 9, 2020 at 9:50 AM That would be unforgettable. Congrats on your win. Newton Ranaweera September 9, 2020 at 11:19 AM Thank you so much, Richard!!

Anne-Lise Andresen September 9, 2020 at 2:46 AM - Returns with a happy congratulations, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Newton Ranaweera September 9, 2020 at 3:53 AM Thank you so much, Anne-Lise!!

Andrea Dietrich September 4, 2020 at 1:59 PM now that would be embarrassing. For sure to stay in one's memory. well done Newton Ranaweera September 5, 2020 at 3:05 PM Thank you so much, Andrea!!

Anne-Lise Andresen September 2, 2020 at 3:21 AM - A sweet memory, Newton:) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Newton Ranaweera September 2, 2020 at 4:01 AM Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for this sweet comment!!