I Love You

In the drizzling rain

Lemon afternoon it was
On fire was the forest
Vertigo-molecules in the breeze
Electricity in clasping clouds

Yellow roses holding fingers
Opened the lips
Unanchored our birds



September 8, 2019
Writing Challenge 1, September 2019 - Eight Line Form
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La France Avatar
September 16, 2019 at 11:51 AM
Probir congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent Acrostic poem so beautifully written.
Andresen Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 12:59 PM
- Lovely written Probir, congratulations on your winning poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gupta Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 8:14 AM
Thanks, Sunshine ...
Dietrich Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 5:05 PM
wow, what a GREAT acrostic. TFS. Congratulations
Gupta Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 7:25 AM
Thank you, Andrea ...
Chiri Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 12:23 PM
So beautiful probir!;) congrats on your win my friend!;)
Makama Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 10:16 AM
Wow... This is top notch and mind appealing. Great work friend
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