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In the drizzling rain Lemon afternoon it was On fire was the forest Vertigo-molecules in the breeze Electricity in clasping clouds Yellow roses holding fingers Opened the lips Unanchored our birds September 8, 2019 Writing Challenge 1, September 2019 - Eight Line Form Sponsor, Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode

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Date: 9/16/2019 11:51:00 AM
Probir congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent Acrostic poem so beautifully written.
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Date: 9/12/2019 12:59:00 PM
- Lovely written Probir, congratulations on your winning poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/14/2019 8:14:00 AM
Thanks, Sunshine ...
Date: 9/10/2019 5:05:00 PM
wow, what a GREAT acrostic. TFS. Congratulations
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/11/2019 7:25:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea ...
Date: 9/10/2019 12:23:00 PM
So beautiful probir!;) congrats on your win my friend!;)
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Date: 9/9/2019 10:16:00 AM
Wow... This is top notch and mind appealing. Great work friend
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