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I Love You

By Valerie D. Staton I love you… More than Elmer loves glue More than Bruce loves Kung Fu More than Sara loves pie You’re the apple of my eye More than Samson loves Delilah More than smoke loves fire More than Adam loves Eve You're the only one I need More than needle loves thread More than Wilma loves Fred More than peaches loves cream More than I’d ever dare to dream I love you...

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Joanna Feltham

Date: 5/16/2022 12:42:00 AM

I enjoyed your poem, the flow and rhyme was great. Nicely penned.

Valerie Staton
Date: 5/16/2022 5:46:00 AM

Thank you for reading. I am thrilled you enjoyed my poem. Take care and God bless!

Arjun Jangid

Date: 4/30/2022 3:39:00 AM

I like it more than... Lovely

Valerie Staton
Date: 5/15/2022 9:20:00 PM

Thanks for reading! God bless you and keep you!

Franci Hoffman

Date: 4/28/2022 5:29:00 AM

A delightful piece and brilliantly written.

Valerie Staton
Date: 5/15/2022 9:21:00 PM

Thank you!!

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 4/27/2022 11:40:00 PM

A brilliant poem!

Valerie Staton
Date: 5/15/2022 9:22:00 PM

Thanks Jeanette! I am thrilled you enjoyed my poem. God bless you and those you adore! Take care!

Andreas Akun

Date: 4/27/2022 7:09:00 PM

I love the fact that your love is that great! Truly beautiful and cunning piece...

Valerie Staton
Date: 5/15/2022 9:23:00 PM

Thank you! Take care!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/27/2022 5:34:00 PM

So cute!

Valerie Staton
Date: 5/15/2022 9:24:00 PM

Thanks Kim! Big hug sent your way! Take care!

Tj Lewis

Date: 4/27/2022 5:14:00 PM

A truly lovely poem... TJ

Valerie Staton
Date: 5/15/2022 9:25:00 PM

Thank you so very much!

Jeff Kyser

Date: 4/27/2022 2:26:00 PM

More than Elmer loves glue, lol, nice

Valerie Staton
Date: 5/15/2022 9:27:00 PM

Thanks for reading Jeff! Take care!

Ann Foster

Date: 6/13/2019 4:42:00 PM

:) Made me feel happy. Innocent. Really neat. Good job. Ann

Valerie Staton
Date: 5/15/2022 9:26:00 PM

Thanks Ann! Glad you enjoyed reading it. Take care!

John Conde

Date: 2/3/2019 8:41:00 AM

Haha, thats a good one I like the wilma and fred line myself

Valerie Staton
Date: 2/3/2019 8:51:00 AM

Thank you!

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 2/2/2019 7:11:00 PM

What a feel good verse, enjoyed this so much, Valerie.

Valerie Staton
Date: 2/2/2019 11:26:00 PM

Thank you Sandra!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/11/2019 7:49:00 AM

Very clever write Valerie..a fun read.

Valerie Staton
Date: 1/11/2019 10:07:00 AM

Thank you!

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 1/10/2019 3:41:00 PM

Super piece Valerie, really inspires one showing love in its highest dimension, blessings, Gordon

Valerie Staton
Date: 1/11/2019 10:11:00 AM

Thanks for the feedback. Have a wonderful day!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/9/2019 7:42:00 PM

Ha, ha! Delightful, Valerie. Thanks for the smiles. Best wishes, Gershon

Valerie Staton
Date: 1/9/2019 8:23:00 PM

Thanks and you're very welcome!

James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 1/9/2019 6:25:00 PM

WOW!!! and WOW again I love how you wrote this poem... A fav for me... Blessings and peace James (Grand write)

Valerie Staton
Date: 1/9/2019 8:19:00 PM

Thank you for the wonderful feedback. God bless you and keep you!

Bobby May

Date: 1/9/2019 2:56:00 PM

I love how you wrote this my friend, excellent Valerie!!

Valerie Staton
Date: 1/9/2019 8:24:00 PM

Thank you for your kind response. Wishing you the best of everything. May God bless you and keep you.

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/9/2019 2:46:00 PM

This is creatively written and so sweet! :)

Valerie Staton
Date: 1/9/2019 8:20:00 PM

Thank you!

Michael Wise

Date: 1/9/2019 8:42:00 AM

That's a LOT of love there! I love THIS! :)

Valerie Staton
Date: 1/9/2019 10:29:00 AM

Thank you!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/9/2019 7:13:00 AM

I was nodding my head to all of these Valerie but stopped dead in my dendrites when I read "more than Wilma loves Fred". Surely NOT! Hahahahaha Thanks for the smile of the day. Well done my friend!

Valerie Staton
Date: 1/9/2019 10:33:00 AM

Glad to have placed a smile on your face. :)