Valerie Staton Poet Rhyme

I Love You

By Valerie D. Staton


I love you…
More than Elmer loves glue
More than Bruce loves Kung Fu
More than Sara loves pie
You’re the apple of my eye

More than Samson loves Delilah
More than smoke loves fire
More than Adam loves Eve
You're the only one I need

More than needle loves thread
More than Wilma loves Fred
More than peaches loves cream
More than I’d ever dare to dream

I love you...

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Jo Chamberlain May 16, 2022 at 12:42 AM I enjoyed your poem, the flow and rhyme was great. Nicely penned. Valerie Staton May 16, 2022 at 5:46 AM Thank you for reading. I am thrilled you enjoyed my poem. Take care and God bless!

Arjun Jangid April 30, 2022 at 3:39 AM I like it more than... Lovely Valerie Staton May 15, 2022 at 9:20 PM Thanks for reading! God bless you and keep you!

Franci Hoffman April 28, 2022 at 5:29 AM A delightful piece and brilliantly written. Valerie Staton May 15, 2022 at 9:21 PM Thank you!!

Daisy Meadows April 27, 2022 at 11:40 PM A brilliant poem! Valerie Staton May 15, 2022 at 9:22 PM Thanks Jeanette! I am thrilled you enjoyed my poem. God bless you and those you adore! Take care!

Andreas Akun April 27, 2022 at 7:09 PM I love the fact that your love is that great! Truly beautiful and cunning piece... Valerie Staton May 15, 2022 at 9:23 PM Thank you! Take care!

Kim Rodrigues April 27, 2022 at 5:34 PM So cute! Valerie Staton May 15, 2022 at 9:24 PM Thanks Kim! Big hug sent your way! Take care!

Tj Lewis April 27, 2022 at 5:14 PM A truly lovely poem... TJ Valerie Staton May 15, 2022 at 9:25 PM Thank you so very much!

Jeff Kyser April 27, 2022 at 2:26 PM More than Elmer loves glue, lol, nice Valerie Staton May 15, 2022 at 9:27 PM Thanks for reading Jeff! Take care!

Ann Foster June 13, 2019 at 4:42 PM :) Made me feel happy. Innocent. Really neat. Good job. Ann Valerie Staton May 15, 2022 at 9:26 PM Thanks Ann! Glad you enjoyed reading it. Take care!

John Conde February 3, 2019 at 8:41 AM Haha, thats a good one I like the wilma and fred line myself Valerie Staton February 3, 2019 at 8:51 AM Thank you!

Vijay Pandit January 11, 2019 at 7:49 AM Very clever write Valerie..a fun read. Valerie Staton January 11, 2019 at 10:07 AM Thank you!

Gordon Mcconnell January 10, 2019 at 3:41 PM Super piece Valerie, really inspires one showing love in its highest dimension, blessings, Gordon Valerie Staton January 11, 2019 at 10:11 AM Thanks for the feedback. Have a wonderful day!

Gershon Wolf January 9, 2019 at 7:42 PM Ha, ha! Delightful, Valerie. Thanks for the smiles. Best wishes, Gershon Valerie Staton January 9, 2019 at 8:23 PM Thanks and you're very welcome!

James Edward Lee Sr. January 9, 2019 at 6:25 PM WOW!!! and WOW again I love how you wrote this poem... A fav for me... Blessings and peace James (Grand write) Valerie Staton January 9, 2019 at 8:19 PM Thank you for the wonderful feedback. God bless you and keep you!

Bobby May January 9, 2019 at 2:56 PM I love how you wrote this my friend, excellent Valerie!! Valerie Staton January 9, 2019 at 8:24 PM Thank you for your kind response. Wishing you the best of everything. May God bless you and keep you.

Heidi Sands January 9, 2019 at 2:46 PM This is creatively written and so sweet! :) Valerie Staton January 9, 2019 at 8:20 PM Thank you!

Michael Wise January 9, 2019 at 8:42 AM That's a LOT of love there! I love THIS! :) Valerie Staton January 9, 2019 at 10:29 AM Thank you!

Caren Krutsinger January 9, 2019 at 7:13 AM I was nodding my head to all of these Valerie but stopped dead in my dendrites when I read "more than Wilma loves Fred". Surely NOT! Hahahahaha Thanks for the smile of the day. Well done my friend! Valerie Staton January 9, 2019 at 10:33 AM Glad to have placed a smile on your face. :)