Kelly Deschler Poet Quatrain

I Love the Way You Lie

I know that you are seeing someone else,
I'm not there when you close your eyes,
I believe that you are kissing me,
Knowing I love the way you lie.

I hear those three words from your lips,
If love is even possible, it's impossible to cry,
Though I know your heart is not truly mine,
I will always love the way you lie.

Your arms hold me as if you care,
My wise heart still wonders why,
Pretending that everything is alright,
Because I love the way you lie.

When I kiss you I think about nothing,
Wishing it wasn't you when I open my eyes,
I wonder, if I told you the truth,
Would you love the way I lie?





Written for Just That Archaic Poet's contest - "Sing To Me"

Inspired by the song "Love The Way You Lie Pt. 2" by Rihanna ft. Eminem

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Debbie Guzzi February 22, 2015 at 8:00 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & love Kelly Deschler February 28, 2015 at 1:10 AM Thank you, Debbie :)

Skat A February 22, 2015 at 5:48 PM Another wonderful win. Luv SKAT Kelly Deschler February 26, 2015 at 3:10 PM Thank you once again for your kind congrats, SKAT :)

Nathan D. February 22, 2015 at 4:08 PM Kelly, Sorry, it took me this long to close my contest. Congrats :) NATE Kelly Deschler February 26, 2015 at 2:57 PM Thank you for including my poem on your winner's list. I appreciate it very much, Nathan :)

Jan Allison February 22, 2015 at 4:00 PM dropping back with my congrats again Kelly:-) Hugs jan xx Kelly Deschler February 25, 2015 at 9:23 PM Thank you again for the kind congrats, Jan... hugs :)

Cecilia Macfarlane October 30, 2014 at 9:00 PM So many don't want to see to lie because the truth hurts so much. Excellent write Kelly and win. Hugs Kelly Deschler November 5, 2014 at 5:38 PM You're absolutely right, Cecilia. Sometimes, a lie can be easier to live with than the truth... Thank you for your kind comments. I appreciate them very much!

Mark Trichet October 25, 2014 at 5:16 PM Loved it Kelly, well done. Kelly Deschler November 2, 2014 at 9:34 PM Thank you, Mark. I'm glad you liked my poem!

Maurice Yvonne October 22, 2014 at 6:40 PM Congratulations Kelly I love the way you write. Kelly Deschler October 27, 2014 at 10:47 PM I very much appreciate your kind words, Maurice. Thank you for the congrats!

Paul Callus October 22, 2014 at 1:15 PM Enjoyed this 'relationship' poem, Kelly. Living a lie could have repercussions. I love how you tackled this subject, especially that final captivating line. Congrats on your fine win. // paul Kelly Deschler October 27, 2014 at 10:44 PM Thank you for your nice comments and the kind congrats. I appreciate them so much, Paul!.... Sometimes, a lie is easier to live with than the truth. But, deep in our hearts we know it's not right, and a wise decision has to be made.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl October 22, 2014 at 11:32 AM Well done Kelly lovely piece, congratulations xx Kelly Deschler October 27, 2014 at 10:29 PM Thank you for your nice comments and the kind congrats. I appreciate them very much, Mandy!

Dr.Ram Mehta October 22, 2014 at 9:53 AM Lovely write on lost love, Kelly, congrats on the win Kelly Deschler October 27, 2014 at 10:20 PM Thank you for the nice comments and kind congrats. I appreciate them very much, Dr. Ram!

Kayod5 Kayode October 22, 2014 at 7:01 AM This is lovely,as long as the lie keeps you going,all is well.Congrats Kelly. Kelly Deschler October 27, 2014 at 10:08 PM Sometimes, a lie is easier to live with than the truth.... Thank you so much for your nice comments and the kind congrats. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem, Kayode!

Brenda Meier-Hans October 21, 2014 at 10:22 PM Wow Kelly this is amazing how you brought an extremely sad situation into a beautiful touching poem. Congratulations on your win. Kelly Deschler October 27, 2014 at 2:08 AM Thank you so much, Brenda. I really do appreciate your kind comments!

Carrie Richards October 21, 2014 at 7:39 PM Congratulations, Kelly on this poem of lost love! I can hear the music of each verse! Kelly Deschler October 26, 2014 at 9:27 PM Thank you for your nice comments and kind congrats. I appreciate them so much, Carrie!

Joseph May October 21, 2014 at 7:35 PM Congrats on your win Kelly Kelly Deschler October 26, 2014 at 5:31 PM Thank you very much, Joseph!

Jan Allison October 21, 2014 at 6:53 PM oh such a sad deep emotional poem - such a tragedy when relationships are based on lies and deceit. many congrats on your win - making this a favourite:-) Hugs Jan xxx Kelly Deschler October 26, 2014 at 2:15 AM Thank you so much for the kind congrats, Jan. I really do appreciate you making this poem a favorite! Hugs :)

Debbie Duncan April 16, 2014 at 4:21 PM You did this very well, I've written a few in this way . Too bad some couples have to do this . Have a blessed Easter Kelly ;) Kelly Deschler April 19, 2014 at 1:36 PM Thank you for your kind comments, Debbie. I wish you a Happy Easter, too. :)

Sheri Fresonke Harper March 28, 2014 at 7:56 PM Nice twist in this poem about relationships, its so sad this couple is this way. Enjoyed it Kelly. Kelly Deschler March 29, 2014 at 10:18 PM It is a very sad thing to see any couple having to live with this kind of hurt. Thank you very much for your kind comments, Sheri!

Mustapha Mohammed March 11, 2014 at 5:45 PM Enticing and very beautifully portrayed. I felt the emotions, I felt a deep swoon as I perused every inch of this sensual delicate piece of a poem. I savored every moment of it. Well done dear Kelly. Kelly Deschler March 12, 2014 at 9:19 PM Thank you so much, Mustapha! Your wonderful comments mean a lot to me, my friend! I'm so glad that you enjoyed this poem. Please, consider entering my first contest. The theme is "Heart And Soul". Your style of poetry is just what I am looking for! :)

Dr.Ram Mehta March 10, 2014 at 6:44 AM Lovely write. Congratulations on the fine win, kelly Kelly Deschler March 12, 2014 at 6:20 PM Thank you so much, Dr. Ram. Glad you enjoyed it! :)

Just That Archaic Poet March 9, 2014 at 10:59 AM Excellent job, SP; congrats on your win and placement. Thanks for joining in :) Kelly Deschler March 11, 2014 at 5:57 PM Thank you very much, BP! I appreciate you stopping by. And, you're very welcome. I always enjoy your contests, my friend! :)

Andrea Dietrich March 3, 2014 at 6:54 PM this is awesome!!! I think I never did this contest. Dang. I just could not feel inspired. Kelly Deschler March 5, 2014 at 7:29 PM Thank you so much, Andrea! I was already familiar with the song I chose, so that drew me in to write for this contest. I haven't been entering as many contests lately. Sometimes, the inspiration just doesn't happen for me, either!

Robin Davis March 2, 2014 at 9:53 PM Kelly Such powerful and deep words. The intense feelings in your heart shine through the whole poem. Thanks for the great comment on my Birthday poem.. Kelly Deschler March 4, 2014 at 10:15 PM Thank you very much, Robin! I always appreciate your kind comments...You're welcome, my friend! :)

Chuck Melugin February 28, 2014 at 5:46 AM Exquisite expressions of mutual perception. 7 My best. chuck Kelly Deschler February 28, 2014 at 7:10 PM Thank you very much, Chuck! This was not an easy poem to write. I wanted to tell both sides of the story, but from one perspective.

Poet Tacito February 20, 2014 at 7:11 AM That is called "Doing unto others". Fierce lines. Awesome job. Kelly Deschler February 24, 2014 at 3:47 PM Exactly. Treating others how they treat you is only fair, even though it is not always the right thing to be doing. Thank you once again, Drake! That means a lot coming from you! I appreciate you stopping by to read and comment on my poems. :)

Joe Maverick February 20, 2014 at 12:48 AM Good twist at the end in this one Kelly, enjoyed its ulterior ambiencce.. Best wishes for the contest..! Kelly Deschler February 22, 2014 at 5:08 PM Thank you very much, Joe! I am glad that you enjoyed this poem. And, I appreciate the good luck wishes! :)

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