Andrea Dietrich Poet Rhyme

I Love Salt

Now don’t get me wrong – I love sweets.
I love all kinds of sugary treats.
I like cake; I like pie,
and for chocolate I die.
I’m hankering now for a malt!
But nothing beats something with salt.

Caramel corn can be nice.
But I prefer salt or some spice.
It would be a mistake
if I did not shake
a while before calling a halt
(into buttery popcorn) my salt!

I shake it all over spaghetti.
I shake it as if it’s confetti!
On french fries and steak
and casseroles I make -
for sure I will have to exalt
my favorite dishes with salt!

March 5, 2021 for Anthony Biaanco's 'Salt' Poetry Contest

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John Watt March 22, 2021 at 10:38 AM Some really cute rhymes, I loved the spaghetti/confetti one and all the clever rhymes with salt! Anything made from potatoes taste great with salt, as well as meat. I love sprinkling salt over my eggs, sausage, bacon, and hash brown breakfasts. I always enjoy your food poem. Congrats on your win!

Paula Goldsmith March 11, 2021 at 10:08 AM Congratulations on your win. A cute/fun write. Love It. Have a blessed day as you are writing away................

Kenneth Cheney March 11, 2021 at 6:02 AM Per chance did you have anything to do with Mr. Buffet’s lost shaker? Fun piece.

Carol Mitra March 10, 2021 at 10:15 PM Loved the poem Andrea.....by the end of it my mouth was watering :) Congrats on your win...much love :)

Eve Roper March 10, 2021 at 9:52 PM Congratulations on your win, Andrea. <3 Eve

Alexis Y. March 10, 2021 at 8:27 PM Hi Andrea, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your win. Have a great evening:-) Alexis

Caren Krutsinger March 9, 2021 at 9:56 AM A gorgeously written poem - for sure a winner in a contest about salt!

Carolyn Devonshire March 7, 2021 at 7:57 AM As long as your blood pressure is good, it's fun to binge on popcorn or pretzels. Now, I don't confetti my spaghetti with it (cute rhyme), but I know it makes meat taste better. Best wishes for a win! Hugs, Carolyn

Beryl Edmonds March 7, 2021 at 1:32 AM Salt, we all know too much isn’t good for us, but I can’t give it up. An excellent write Andrea... Belle

Edward Ibeh March 6, 2021 at 4:09 PM I wish I could quit salt cold turkey, but how it that even possible? It's hold on people is devilish I tell ya, devilish! LOL. Salt just makes food taste good, period. We'd go crazy without it! I sense a winner here, Andrea:-) Love it! I took the salt theme in a completely different direction. GL in the contest!

Anne-Lise Andresen March 6, 2021 at 12:37 PM - Fresh salted cod with bacon ... carrot stew and potatoes ... yummy, Andrea :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Pettit March 6, 2021 at 7:10 AM I often get scary results after I pump up the cuff of my sphygmomanometer. That's why my sodium chloride intake has to be quite limited. Nevertheless, this is one of your usual fine writes.

L Milton Hankins March 5, 2021 at 8:44 PM Gosh, I do, too, Andrea. But, it was throwing me into congestive heart failure, so I've had to cut back drastically. Still, I miss it. This is an excellent entry for the Salt Contest. Best of luck!

Anitha Jayasankar March 5, 2021 at 6:52 PM I love salt more than sweet... yes nothing beats something with salt and spicy.... Enjoyed reading your poem.. Best wishes in the contest dear Andrea... Hugs ~ Ani

Terry Flood March 5, 2021 at 4:12 PM Andrea, I reckon there’s a podium with your name on it. Great entry, good luck. Terry

Gershon Wolf March 5, 2021 at 2:40 PM Now 'spaghetti and confetti,' those are two amazing rhymes. Better than Dr. Zeuss and Little Red Caboose! :) gw

Vijay Pandit March 5, 2021 at 12:45 PM Salt has that unique place in our lives. More so in yours, Andrea. Can't do without it!

Alexis Y. March 5, 2021 at 11:51 AM Hi Andrea, I, too, like salt, I like sugar as well . Too much of anything isn't good—everything in moderation. Now I have a sudden urge for some buttery popcorn. I enjoyed the read. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis

Victor Buhagiar March 5, 2021 at 10:54 AM Take care of your blood pressure. :) Andrea Dietrich March 5, 2021 at 10:27 PM fortunately I have good blood pressure, salt has never affected me and I rarely eat popcorn or spegetti though they are two of my favorite foods!! Baked potatoes with butter and salt, so yummy too.

P.S. Awtry March 5, 2021 at 10:22 AM I too love salt, my blood pressure does not :/ Love this poem, bouncy and fun write. blessings :)