Lewis Raynes Poet Quatrain

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I Lost the Love of My Life But She Hadn'T

Dressed in spectacular, she engulfed my world,
Shattering my life of commotion and flutter.
I glimpsed through her blue eyes, into her soul,
My instinct spoke but I could only hear stutter.

Her story was brave, she owned her own thoughts, 
And she loved like no other could.
I loved her beyond any language of the world, 
It was her everything that I understood.

And then it happened, she stopped dreaming about dreams,
Her iron cold rage soon became hot.
And she broke my heart the day she left on a bus,
I’d lost my soul mate but, dispassionately, she had not.

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Probir Gupta May 30, 2016 at 8:22 PM May her dreams return/ to the beautiful joint urn.....A touching poem... Lewis Raynes May 31, 2016 at 12:04 AM I miss those dreams terribly Probir, thank you, your poetic friend lewis.

Jan Allison May 30, 2016 at 7:38 PM aww lewis the ending is oh so sad :-( hugs Jan xx Lewis Raynes May 30, 2016 at 8:22 PM Thanks Jan, this happened a long time ago, when I was naive.