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I Lost the Love of My Life But She Hadn'T

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Dressed in spectacular, she engulfed my world, Shattering my life of commotion and flutter. I glimpsed through her blue eyes, into her soul, My instinct spoke but I could only hear stutter. Her story was brave, she owned her own thoughts, And she loved like no other could. I loved her beyond any language of the world, It was her everything that I understood. And then it happened, she stopped dreaming about dreams, Her iron cold rage soon became hot. And she broke my heart the day she left on a bus, I’d lost my soul mate but, dispassionately, she had not.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/30/2016 8:22:00 PM
May her dreams return/ to the beautiful joint urn.....A touching poem...
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 5/31/2016 12:04:00 AM
I miss those dreams terribly Probir, thank you, your poetic friend lewis.
Date: 5/30/2016 7:38:00 PM
aww lewis the ending is oh so sad :-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/30/2016 8:22:00 PM
Thanks Jan, this happened a long time ago, when I was naive.

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