I Lost the First

Standing in one spot,
Enjoying my freedom on
A park podium.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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December 6, 2008 at 8:54 AM
Clever piece , Aaron ... Now sing the National Anthem , and the win will be complete ....
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