I Lost My Trust

I lost my trust and belief 
In this merciless world 
That even wounds the shadow 
And sucks the blood emitting 
I lost my trust and belief 
In God 
As he is crucifying at every second 
And lost all his power 
But I trust in me and I will fight 
As life is to live and not to weep
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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October 17, 2012 at 5:09 PM
this one touches my heart J..Jl
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October 17, 2012 at 10:40 PM
thank you dear.jk
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June 18, 2012 at 9:08 AM
wow I really feel this one.....sigh thank you for sharing
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June 18, 2012 at 9:11 AM
thanks. jk
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June 14, 2012 at 6:58 PM
Jay, very deep...xox~pd
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June 18, 2012 at 9:12 AM
thanks .jk
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June 14, 2012 at 7:39 AM
This is definitely the conclusion LOTS and LOTS of people have come to. Stay strong, keep writing and NEVER hold back in your poetry <3
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June 14, 2012 at 7:44 AM
thank you for your kind words .jk
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