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I Lost My Camel

I lost my camel and now I am on foot Why couldn't I just stay where I was put I lost my ride now I might die Why was it all because I told a lie I really don't know why I have walked so long I think I see a pie Help me someone this is what I need I think I just need some more weed Well if this is a dream I see then don't wake me until I get a drink I think what I need indeed is still out there let us wonder among the sand and the sun Until someone calls for us to come into the shade and celabrate maybe have a prade Tricia Bernard 9/15/14

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Ma Yaseen

Date: 9/16/2014 4:08:00 AM

nice use of imagery, i enjoyed reading it... let's wonder among the sand and the sun, this line touched me.... Thumbs up Friend Always,,,, Malik

Patricia Bernard
Date: 9/16/2014 7:14:00 AM

Thanks I wrote this @ about midnight or after so I was punch drunk and not sure what it would turn out like......Tricia