Patricia Bernard Poet Dramatic Monologue

I Lost My Camel

I lost my camel and now I am on foot
Why couldn't I just stay  where I was put
I lost my ride now I might die
Why was it all because I told a lie
I really don't know why I have walked so long I think I see a pie
Help me someone this is what I need I think I just need some more weed
Well if this is a dream I see then don't wake me until I get a drink
I think what I need indeed is still out there let us wonder among the sand and the sun
Until someone calls for us to come into the shade and celabrate maybe have a prade

Tricia Bernard
9/15/14

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Ma Yaseen September 16, 2014 at 4:08 AM nice use of imagery, i enjoyed reading it... let's wonder among the sand and the sun, this line touched me.... Thumbs up Friend Always,,,, Malik Patricia Bernard September 16, 2014 at 7:14 AM Thanks I wrote this @ about midnight or after so I was punch drunk and not sure what it would turn out like......Tricia