I Lost It

i lost my pencil today, i should've written 
this poem with it
i should've drawn a sketch that would sum 
up all my feelings
i should've, but i didn't.

i lost my shoes today, i would've worn 
them yesterday
i thought i'd keep them for a special day, 
that day has come
now i don't have shoes to wear.

i lost R20 today, i should've bought a pair 
of socks
i should've bought some veggies from that 
old lady 
on the street so she could feed her kids.
i thought I’d keep it for a rainy day, that 
day has come
now i don't have a cent.

i lost my tongue today, i thought I’d only 
say something
when it suits others. i should've said "i 
love you mom"
i should've said " forgive me LORD"
i should've, i should've, i should've.
i could've, but i didn't.

if GOD could grant you a wish today, 
would you wish
back everything you've lost, or would you 
ask Him to 
help you acknowledge the things you still 
have.
you could, 'coz you still have your life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Agustin Avatar
March 13, 2025 at 8:33 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed day.
A  Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 8:05 PM
ENJOYING THIS A SECOND TIME...SKAT
Mohammed Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 7:16 AM
Nice philosophy Daurius.Welcome on board.
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August 6, 2013 at 9:27 AM
Amazing ending Daurius ,, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless..... Hugs *SKAT*
Andresen Avatar
August 6, 2013 at 7:05 AM
Hello new member: Daurius ! - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
A   Avatar
August 6, 2013 at 4:34 AM
wow, full of regrets...(I should of) Daurius, I would acknowledged and pray in accepting the things I lost. great poem-A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@. .
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