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I Looked Out At the Rain

It rained today, Dark pellets of the heaven's tears Soaking up the sounds of the earth Changing them The trees were felled Big and old, bent to the will of the water The cracked sounds of expendability Following them Floods wiped away all evidence of activity Leaving the earth shifted and soaked Feet ferrying bodies to shelter Shielding them It made me sad This washing away of things I know The clouds grey as though with sorrow Hurting them

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Date: 10/17/2020 6:33:00 AM
Beautiful depiction of a raging storm Erina. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Erina Rain
Date: 10/17/2020 1:04:00 PM
Thank you so much for taking the time to read it!
Date: 7/28/2017 8:15:00 AM
I really like your poem --- it makes me think. There are a lot of poems about the beauty of the rain, but your poem talks about the sadness that can be associated with raining and flooding.
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Erina Rain
Date: 7/28/2017 9:39:00 AM
Thank you so much!

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