I Looked For You Today Premiere Contest Winner

Dear Mom,
I looked for you today.
I found you in the smell of coffee,
as I passed our favorite café. 

I felt you in the cool breeze,
that traveled fiercely up my spine.
I put my face toward the sky
and found you in the warm sunshine.

I looked for you today,
but I didn't have to look far.
When I lifted my head up high,
I found you in the stars.

I will never stop looking,
because I know you're always around.
I know you have never left me,
you're just waiting to be found.


May 9, 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 1/28/2021 5:17:00 PM
Beautiful poem. A FAVE for me. So glad to have found it published in the 2020 PS Anthology~
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Date: 7/5/2016 6:22:00 PM
Beautiful, brought tears to my eyes
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Date: 7/4/2016 6:05:00 PM
Great job!!!! I wrote one for my dad who passed Christmas Eve of 2009. I will post it later. It's sort of similar to your beautiful write!!!!
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Date: 6/17/2016 10:36:00 AM
Beautifully penned..! Glorious one..!
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Date: 6/9/2016 2:59:00 PM
Hi Sienna. Congrats for your well, deserved first placement in the contest, with this splendid piece!! ;-)
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Sienna Ethylpen
Date: 6/9/2016 5:38:00 PM
Hi Teddy! Thank you for the kind words and support!
Date: 6/8/2016 5:12:00 PM
Many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sienna Ethylpen
Date: 6/9/2016 5:37:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 6/5/2016 9:59:00 PM
Congratulations..... Sad but very beautiful
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Sienna Ethylpen
Date: 6/7/2016 8:00:00 PM
Thank you! I appreciate you taking the time to read!
Date: 6/5/2016 8:22:00 AM
nice
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Date: 6/4/2016 9:50:00 PM
Simply beautiful, Sienna. Congrats on your top win!
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Sienna Ethylpen
Date: 6/7/2016 8:01:00 PM
Thank you for reading. I appreciate the support!
Date: 6/4/2016 5:55:00 PM
Beautiful! Congratulations!
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Sienna Ethylpen
Date: 6/4/2016 7:12:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 6/4/2016 2:31:00 PM
Congrats on your beautiful placement. Loved always my lovely friend, bl
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Sienna Ethylpen
Date: 6/4/2016 7:12:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words!
Date: 6/4/2016 1:24:00 PM
beautiful tribute,congrats Sienna!
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Sienna Ethylpen
Date: 6/4/2016 7:12:00 PM
Thank you for reading!
Date: 6/4/2016 9:53:00 AM
Sienna, congratulations on your trophy win in the 'to mom' Premiere contest! Such a loving tribute to your dear Mom...even when they are departed, they are always with us...I share your sentiments. Hugs, Sandra
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Sienna Ethylpen
Date: 6/4/2016 7:14:00 PM
Hi Sandra, Thank you so much for the kind words. The loss of a mother is a pain I would not wish on even my worst enemy.
Date: 6/4/2016 8:58:00 AM
Sienna, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Sienna Ethylpen
Date: 6/4/2016 7:14:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 6/4/2016 7:32:00 AM
Congratulations Sienna, a most deserving win...
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Sienna Ethylpen
Date: 6/4/2016 7:15:00 PM
I appreciate your kind and encouraging words!
Date: 6/4/2016 12:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's contest. Well done. Love, Joyce
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Sienna Ethylpen
Date: 6/4/2016 7:18:00 PM
Thank you! Same to you. I enjoyed your poem as well :)
Date: 5/21/2016 10:26:00 AM
Sienna Ethylpen, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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Sienna Ethylpen
Date: 5/22/2016 7:19:00 PM
Thank you for reading!
Date: 5/9/2016 7:29:00 PM
Oh Sienna this brought a huge lump to my throat - am so lucky I still have my mum:-) hugs jan xx
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Sienna Ethylpen
Date: 5/9/2016 7:41:00 PM
Give her a hug for me, or let her know how much she means to you! Never go a day without doing that. I regret every opportunity I failed to let my mom know what she meant to me.
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