I Look At You

I look at you, asleep, weary and tired
the wind of noon through the curtains, shy,
on your thin dress, on your body plays,
cradles you, caresses you and everything wraps,
your bed and you seem slowly rise
in a slight vortex, in a deep sigh:
motion of love between earth and sky.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Hollywood-Cutts Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 10:45 AM
like this one very much. i can place myself in there and see it in my mind.
Magistri Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 4:04 AM
Thank you for yuor words; I'm ver happy you've liked it.
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