I Look Around

Im ready to go nuts
I think its the doughnuts
I look around
a bunch of prefabbed huts

everywhere there's light
there's ladies of night
I look around
I know that its not right

its all the same
from cali to main
I look arround
its going down the drain

I cant get away
from night to day
I look around
and find a blackish grey

is it just me
just something I see
I look around
I see that were not free

red, blue, and the white
has she lost her sight
I look around
and see she likes to fight
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November 27, 2013 at 6:04 PM
Welcome to the Soup I hope to read more of your verses soon. Light & Love
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