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I Listen To Life

A spark of inspiration Ignites in my mind, listening... To life on a daily basis. Some women walk by me on the street And I hear their heels clack. I love to listen to the autumn wind howl; I see it flap an American flag mounted High atop a roof. When the wind blows a whistle Dry foliage does rustle and my wind chimes Does tinkle from time to time. How wonderous to pause and absorb Sounds in and out of home. I hear the long hand of the clock tick, Bacon on a hot griddle sizzle; Sometimes I hear a crow caw Some mornings, I hear chickadees chirp. In the dead of twilight, crickets shriek. Impatient drivers whiz by on the road So fast their car tires screech. I listen to life, daily. Preferably out in nature. Onomatopoeia Poetry Contest Sponsored by Emile Pinet Date written: 10/31/2021

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Date: 11/18/2021 12:23:00 PM
what wonderful observation Edward, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/18/2021 7:07:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan:-)
Date: 11/14/2021 5:30:00 AM
WOW! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/14/2021 5:58:00 AM
Thank you very much, Beata:-)
Date: 11/14/2021 4:33:00 AM
Great observation, Edward, congratulations:)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/14/2021 5:28:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jo:-)
Date: 11/13/2021 5:18:00 PM
Edward, you have an acute eye and ear for observation, and you have translated these sights and sounds into a marvelous poem of onomatopoeia. I too prefer the nature side of life. Congrats on your win, I much enjoyed reading your musings ~ John
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/14/2021 5:27:00 AM
Thank you very much, John:-) Nice to see you back!
Date: 11/13/2021 11:15:00 AM
Edward, congratulations on your win in Emile's contest. I, too, love to sit and listen to the rhythm and rhyme of life as it screeches, whizzes, shrieks, rustles and chirps. Sending you blessings of the season. Life's language well told!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/13/2021 4:11:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sam:-) It's always delightful to hear your feedback, my friend.
Date: 11/13/2021 10:24:00 AM
Congratulations Edward! Your amazing poem "I Listen To Life", has placed "Third" in my contest. You should take pride, for your poem was special and easily rose to the top of the list. Very well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 11/13/2021 4:09:00 PM
Thank you very much for my placement and the congratulations, Emile:-) Most obliged.

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