I Left Him

I left him 

                     I left him on journey
                     of life, since then peace and love have 
                    fled wiping all colors, only to   
                    rue in tears. My dream screams
                   on his quest in despondence.
                    
   05/18/19

 'your Favorite poem from May, 2019' contest by Julia Ward
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 7:53 PM
Congrats in the contest. I really enjoyed the assonance in the last two lines.
Dutta Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 10:05 PM
Thanks Andrea. Love
Lindley Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 2:52 PM
Congratulations on your win in Dear Heart's Lind68868 contest my friend! God bless.... Robert
Dutta Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 10:06 PM
Thanks n Best Wishes.
Andresen Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 11:50 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Anisha :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 9:47 AM
Anisha, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write !
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