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I Lassoed Some Stars

I lassoed some stars from near and far and kept the dark at bay. I hugged the moon and danced a tune until the break of day. The covers I flung as I kissed the sun and asked it please to stay. I sung a verse to the universe and then I knelt to pray.

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Date: 2/8/2023 10:55:00 AM
Delightful and whimsical poem, Nancy. Superb use of rhythm and rhyme.
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Date: 2/7/2023 4:52:00 PM
Nancy, I love your whimsical style. Best SuZ
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Date: 2/7/2023 2:33:00 PM
Enjoyed this poem, ty
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Date: 7/11/2021 7:31:00 PM
I enjoyed this nicely composed poem, Nancy, I like your use of internal rhymes in the odd number lines. I have written several poems like this. John
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Date: 6/15/2021 1:48:00 PM
Lovely rhythm, almost like a lullaby, Nancy! Enjoyed this sweet poem! :)
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Date: 6/14/2021 1:26:00 PM
What a lovely piece and uplifting message.
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Date: 6/13/2021 7:25:00 PM
Sweet, divine Inspiration, Nancy. Everything's just right about this one! Pray on and write on! Peace, Gershon
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Date: 6/13/2021 12:07:00 PM
absolutely divine poem Nancy, a joy to read I am star struck with the gorgeous rhyme:-) hugs Jan xx
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