I Lassoed Some Stars

I lassoed some stars from near and far
and kept the dark at bay.
I hugged the moon and danced a tune
until the break of day.
The covers I flung as I kissed the sun
and asked it please to stay.
I sung a verse to the universe
and then I knelt to pray.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Hoffman Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 10:55 AM
Delightful and whimsical poem, Nancy. Superb use of rhythm and rhyme.
Delaney Avatar
February 7, 2023 at 4:52 PM
Nancy, I love your whimsical style. Best SuZ
Kettle Avatar
February 7, 2023 at 2:33 PM
Enjoyed this poem, ty
Gondolf Avatar
July 11, 2021 at 7:31 PM
I enjoyed this nicely composed poem, Nancy, I like your use of internal rhymes in the odd number lines. I have written several poems like this. John
Leiser Avatar
June 15, 2021 at 1:48 PM
Lovely rhythm, almost like a lullaby, Nancy! Enjoyed this sweet poem! :)
Lamoureux Avatar
June 14, 2021 at 1:26 PM
What a lovely piece and uplifting message.
Wolf Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 7:25 PM
Sweet, divine Inspiration, Nancy. Everything's just right about this one! Pray on and write on! Peace, Gershon
Allison Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 12:07 PM
absolutely divine poem Nancy, a joy to read I am star struck with the gorgeous rhyme:-) hugs Jan xx
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