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{To be sung to the tune of "I see the light" from "Tangled"}


Good old days lurking in the shadows
Good old tears I cried, walking out
Good old times never are they going
No more can I doubt
All is clear thinking in the sunlight
All is clear, suddenly, I’m free
Singing now I take a bow
I can fully agree

And at last I know you’re right
And it's like I feel so gifted
And at last I know you’re right
And it's like I love your view
And it's not any time to fight
Just see how far we have drifted
All at once everything looks different
Love has broken through!

Good old days working on our love beam
Good old fears shoving down the drain
Good old times never fully knowing
You and all this strain
You are near thinking in the sunlight
You are near suddenly, I glow
Singing now I know somehow
I can see the rainbow

And at last I know you’re right
And it's like I feel so gifted
And at last I know you’re right
And it's like I love your view
And it's not any time to fight
Just see how far we have drifted
All at once everything looks different
Love has broken through!
Love has broken through!


10.31.2021



(When a couple end their fight, understanding their love for each other)


For Natasha L Scragg's "Change the Record" contest

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Date: 11/18/2021 2:06:00 PM
wonderful lyrics Jo, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/12/2021 11:40:00 PM
Very nicely lined up with the rhythms of the song, Jo. Such talent you have to be able to accomplish this while weaving a beautiful love story of reconciliation. Not surprised at all to see you on the winner's list... congrats! May the Lord bless your week ~ John
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Date: 11/12/2021 11:55:00 AM
A beautiful song with a good story line. Excellent sync with the music. It's so nice to see inspiration coming from Disney songs! They have innocence and purity. Congrats on your placement in the contest Jo, and thank you for entering the contest. A lovely song :-)
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Date: 11/12/2021 10:32:00 PM
Thank you, Natasha, I almost didn't attempt it, but then thought, why not give it a try? Never expected to place, so really happy:)
Date: 10/31/2021 10:56:00 AM
Absolutely amazing! I am fine. Hope the same with you
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Date: 10/31/2021 9:31:00 AM
What a feat to change words to fit the song. Best for a win.
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Date: 10/31/2021 7:14:00 AM
Lovely lyrics, Jo. True love works through the obstacles.
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Date: 10/31/2021 5:33:00 AM
Great lyric Jo, you rose well to the challenge. Best of luck. Hope your weekend is going well. Tom
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