I Knew of a Fellow Named Tomzik

I knew of a fellow 
named Tomzik,
whose love for joke  
land'd him to 
limerick.
He dreamed of blue  
berry.
He chewed and 
made merry.
But woke to be 
chewing a stick.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Guzzi Avatar
June 24, 2014 at 5:22 PM
ahh half rhyme - LOL sticks do not taste good! I wrote you 2 more limericks. Light & Love
Cornelius  Chidera  Avatar
June 24, 2014 at 5:44 PM
THANKS for your reading and comment.I really appreciate.
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