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Date written: 07/26/2023

I Kissed You With My Eyes

When I first held you, I kissed you with my eyes,
       And fell in love; your birthday, a special day!
You're the hope floating in the turquoise blue skies;
 The bright sunshine behind clouds of ashen gray.
         You'd lift my spirits whenever I feel blue.
    My heart bursts with delight just looking at you
      No question, you're but a mesmerizing sight!
      Oh, what a feeling! My soul have taken flight.
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Ashley Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 9:38 AM
Dear Edward, your rispetto is so rich and tender. A beautiful poetic expression of fatherly love. Inspiring, high flying poetry, my friend. Lucky little Isabelle! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Ibeh Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 12:58 PM
Coming from the greatest poet of PS ever--in my opinion, at least--that means a great deal to me. Thank you very much for the visit and wonderful comments, Susan:-)
Daniel Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 2:07 AM
Your Isabelle surely deserves such beautiful poetry, Edward, babies can turn us into mushy lovestruck people:) I have a separate folder for my nephew:)
Ibeh Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 5:28 AM
Thank you very much, Joanna:-) I wholeheartedly concur on babies, my friend. I can only imagine how adorably cute your nephew is!
Allison Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 3:53 PM
aww so beautiful and uplifting... is it dedicated to the new baby I wonder. hugs Jan xx
Ibeh Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 4:01 PM
Yes, this poem is about my baby girl, Isabelle:-) Thanks for the lovely visit, Jan! xoxo
Volumes Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 3:13 PM
How wonderful to be so in love. This is a poetic conveyance encrusted with devotion. Emotions casting splendor.
Ibeh Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 4:04 PM
Thank you very much indeed, SV:-)
Pandit Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 3:10 PM
Delightful, romantic! Love resonates throughout.
Ibeh Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 4:04 PM
Thank you, Vijay. I wrote this one for my little princess:-)
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