I Kissed You With My Eyes

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Date written: 07/26/2023

When I first held you, I kissed you with my eyes, And fell in love; your birthday, a special day! You're the hope floating in the turquoise blue skies; The bright sunshine behind clouds of ashen gray. You'd lift my spirits whenever I feel blue. My heart bursts with delight just looking at you No question, you're but a mesmerizing sight! Oh, what a feeling! My soul have taken flight.

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Susan Ashley

Date: 7/27/2023 9:38:00 AM

Dear Edward, your rispetto is so rich and tender. A beautiful poetic expression of fatherly love. Inspiring, high flying poetry, my friend. Lucky little Isabelle! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/27/2023 12:58:00 PM

Coming from the greatest poet of PS ever--in my opinion, at least--that means a great deal to me. Thank you very much for the visit and wonderful comments, Susan:-)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/27/2023 2:07:00 AM

Your Isabelle surely deserves such beautiful poetry, Edward, babies can turn us into mushy lovestruck people:) I have a separate folder for my nephew:)

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/27/2023 5:28:00 AM

Thank you very much, Joanna:-) I wholeheartedly concur on babies, my friend. I can only imagine how adorably cute your nephew is!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/26/2023 3:53:00 PM

aww so beautiful and uplifting... is it dedicated to the new baby I wonder. hugs Jan xx

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/26/2023 4:01:00 PM

Yes, this poem is about my baby girl, Isabelle:-) Thanks for the lovely visit, Jan! xoxo

Speaks Volumes

Date: 7/26/2023 3:13:00 PM

How wonderful to be so in love. This is a poetic conveyance encrusted with devotion. Emotions casting splendor.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/26/2023 4:04:00 PM

Thank you very much indeed, SV:-)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/26/2023 3:10:00 PM

Delightful, romantic! Love resonates throughout.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/26/2023 4:04:00 PM

Thank you, Vijay. I wrote this one for my little princess:-)