I Kissed the Rain and I liked It

We walked the beach, held hands, danced in the rain…
I’d go that La La Land time and again.
But what a bummer, 
Dream of midsummer! 
By dawn my fantasy did slowly wane -
Soaked wet I was, I must have kissed the rain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Mcconnell Avatar
June 8, 2026 at 3:54 AM
This is so original and filled with great insightful line of thought with amazing imagery and expression. Blessings,Gordon
Gibbons Avatar
June 6, 2026 at 6:52 AM
I loved this you painted a picture with words for sure. Have a great weekend enjoy writing
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June 2, 2026 at 12:11 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "I Kissed the Rain" write. Great Ending... "Good Luck"  I did, "Musings of the Mind - I Kissed The Rain." Have a Lovely/Blessed Day Writing Away............
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