I Just Saw

Bailey's an marmalade whisk my eye glare
Smiles of a man marry and skill inner fairy
Frawn stance, a lore france, erewhile recite
Like memory life afore him forby and touch
Then clepe that soft pure white coat skin
Mirror his eyes and gaze to wist mere lips
But no I called not, I named not. I just saw
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Mccall Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 4:20 PM
Very nice and very well written piece of imagism nicely done Talin.
Goff Avatar
April 22, 2017 at 8:52 AM
Sounds like a Celtic song of love lost in battle, perhaps, or urban strife...nice, Talin!
Kalishian Avatar
April 22, 2017 at 9:00 AM
Nice (:
Capitano Avatar
April 22, 2017 at 7:07 AM
Heartbreaking Talin, very sad.
Kalishian Avatar
April 22, 2017 at 7:57 AM
Like a rock I believe in it
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