Seren Roberts Poet Rhyme

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'I'
sounds so harsh a word to say
as though 'I' was the important one each day
a worse expression to be heard
is the use of the 'me' word
so lets look inside ourselves to see
instead of 'me' and 'I' we can say 'we'




Penned  14  April 2015

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Maurice Yvonne April 14, 2015 at 10:02 PM Yes Seren it is true! That is one of the reasons I liked it along with how well you wrote it! Seren Roberts April 16, 2015 at 4:44 AM yep we do....Seren

Maurice Yvonne April 14, 2015 at 9:11 PM This is a poignant write! A Fav! Seren Roberts April 14, 2015 at 9:48 PM true though Armand, we think of I too often.......Seren

Eve Roper April 14, 2015 at 4:18 PM Seren, love your write, a 7 and good luck in the contest. Blessings eve Seren Roberts April 16, 2015 at 4:43 AM thanks Eve......Seren

Jan Allison April 14, 2015 at 6:46 AM I like your take on the theme Seren - am still working on mine ... good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx Seren Roberts April 14, 2015 at 9:50 PM it will be a brilliant piece then Jan .....Seren