I Hungered For Your Moon

I hungered 
for your moon 
last night-

craved all the things about 
you that make you, 
                     well… you. 
I craved your twilight and 
twinkling stars, 
not knowing what I would 
taste in return. 

Throughout the galaxy, 
you emanate all 
things good that the universe 
offers.
I shall relish the moonbeams 
you reflect with such ease. 
The cosmos have nothing on 
you...
    sweetheart.

I thirsted for your moonshine 
like a daydream lost in its 
slumber. 
In the orb of night we shall 
become one and idle on into 
the constellations. 
For no one can be what you are 
to me, 
      and I am everything to you. 

The celestial fiery sky will
always know our love. 
They will see it for generations
and even after that.
Planetary moments bring us to 
where we are today and there 
is nothing that can stand in 
our way. 
 
I hungered 
for your moon 
last night-

Brought one spoon for us 
to share in the delectableness 
of our romance. 
When the solar eclipse appears, 
we will savor with each gentle bite.  


November 6, 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 11/18/2017 8:03:00 PM
Very romantic. Congrats on your win, Laura.
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Date: 11/18/2017 5:13:00 AM
Best wishes and congrats on your placement, Laura ... keep writing, friend! :-)
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Date: 11/17/2017 8:24:00 AM
I brought one spoon for us to share in the delectableness of our romance...love this line! Congratulations Luloo!
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Date: 11/17/2017 2:18:00 AM
Splendid. The words, the meaning, the message. Great. Kai
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