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In words deeply cased lead makes no mistake held by one hammer hitting home dropping through the threads of a barrel smoking time words hotly fused within polished fire Strikes the target truth into the heart of justice pained no longer blind suffering fates path it all makes sense in the end looking at four walls reading the writings feeling a coldness in some Getting a grip through spiritual reality where ghosts hold no body exists to breathe deceivers will fall like lightening sulphur based when the bolt finally strikes them down being honest

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Date: 8/21/2018 6:13:00 PM
Hello Liam Mate!! A very striking and stark metaphorical narrative here. The descriptive imagery you've used creates a most vivid, powerful, and compelling word picture. Outstanding Work!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 8/21/2018 6:47:00 AM
Hi Liam!:)) Wow! A very beautiful, n' oustanding, spiritual poem filled of abundant faith, you've written here ,my dearest friend Liam.I enjoyed it!Very beautifully written!Just awesome!:)Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + + !A fav ! You have a heart of pure gold!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray a lot that you're okay in everything, Liam.Wishing you always all the very best in everything you do, Liam!:)Take always very good care of yourself !Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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