Vanessa Rodriguez Poet Free verse

I Hope Your Are Doing Well, Love

I hope you are doing well, love. 
hope that even though I am not,
you are smiling
without me.

Hope that you don't know what it feels like to
miss me 
the way I 
miss you.

Hope that you will never know the
heartbreak 
of waking up from a dream
where we were still together.

To find I can only 
find you in my fantasies

It's unbecoming 
of me to keep coming 
back when you keep running. 

Its something 
I'll never understand about myself.

The way I love unlovable people.
Still,

I hope you are doing well,
Love. 

I hope you're doing better than me.

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Beata Agustin December 4, 2022 at 9:44 AM Thanks for sharing this. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life. God bless you.

Deb M December 3, 2022 at 5:56 AM Hi Vanessa….a well written poem which conveys your sorrow and pain of losing and missing the one you loved….and they have moved on and you have not. Im sorry you are feeling so sad and hope with time it eases….Take care….Debx Vanessa Rodriguez December 3, 2022 at 2:26 PM I appreciate this so much! and you are very right, time can heal almost anything